TLDR:Would benefit from a context and a reason for running the quest.

Quest worked apart from the end /turn in, when the message contradicted itself i.e. you are one of the first 30 - and I wasn't. (I did the Advanced path).

Concerns:

Context /Purpose:
Not much of a background story, or reason why people should complete the quest e.g. 'Your annual tax is due and you owe the State the following items <list>. Failure to comply within x days (played) will result in loss of access to Council Storage facilities'.
As such, it felt like it was just removing inventory from the game.

As a result, no relevant reason to repeat the quest should it ever be offered again.

First 30:
The first 30 to turn in the quest could lead to competition and decrease co-operative behaviour
Some people might consider it unfair (due to time zone, etc.)

Materials required:
The quest required a lot of materials and in terms of rewards received versus material and time required was a 'loss'.
The items from the Sewer were particularly onerous to gather.